[WP1] V3 of First Public Comment Document input -- for WP1 call #10

[Alice Jansen]

Dear all,
Documents have been added to the wiki -
v3 of public comment content
.DOC - https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/2015-04-15-CCWG-ACCT-WP1-firstcommentreport-content-v3.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1429095390236&api=v2
.PDF - https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/2015-04-15-CCWG-ACCT-WP1-firstcommentreport-content-v3.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1429095410430&api=v2
redline tracked changes compared with V2
.DOC https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/MARK%20UP%20-%20SHOWS%20CHANGES%20V3%20compared%20with%20V2.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1429095430949&api=v2
.PDF https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/MARK%20UP%20-%20SHOWS%20CHANGES%20V3%20compared%20with%20V2.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1429095450581&api=v2
Thanks
Best regards
Alice
From: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz<mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
Date: Wednesday, April 15, 2015 12:30 PM
To: "wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>" <wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>>
Subject: [WP1] V3 of First Public Comment Document input -- for WP1 call #10

Hi all

Please find attached the following documents:

- v3 of our public comment content, in PDF and .docx
- a redline tracked changes compared with V2, in PDF and .docx

ICANN staff - please put these docs on the Wiki asap, and circulate the links.

Please note - I have used Word to do this, and the document is not based on the Google document. Any comments on that document have, unfortunately, not been taken into account. Please advise ASAP if there are comments for me to take into account there.

thanks,
Jordan



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