[WP1] Revised draft for bringing AoC Reviews into ICANN Bylaws

[Steve DelBianco]

Working from Avri’s emails and discussions in Istanbul, here’s a new draft of how the CCWG could bring AoC reviews (and their explicit commitments) into the ICANN bylaws.

I started with the v5 document<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/52888421/Draft%201-%20AoC%20Accountability%20Mechanisms%20%5BSteve%20v5%5D.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1425509039000&api=v2> we reviewed in Istanbul, and made these edits:

  *   Added context and background on AoC termination, Stress Test 14, and citations —  to make this easier for new reviewers to understand
  *   Noted that AoC sections 3,4,7, and 8 include commitments that should be imported into Core Values section of ICANN’s bylaws (Mathew Shears and Becky Burr)
  *   Re-arranged Fiona’s original doc so that actual AoC text is shown just above our proposed text.
  *   Added a column of notes to explain where we are differing from original AoC text.
  *   Re-phrased the review of effectiveness of GAC interaction, per several commenters.
  *   Adopted Kavouss’ suggestion to require implementation of prior reviews before next round of new gTLDs
  *   Adopted Avri’s suggested language for ATRT review item f
  *   Added Avri’s suggestion for annual reports
  *   Added comments from Sebastien, James Gannon, Alan Greenberg, and others.

Look forward to discussion via email or on our next WP1 call.

Best,
Steve

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Steve DelBianco
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