[WP1] WP1 meeting - 19h UTC on 14 Sep

[Steve DelBianco]

Jordan — I realize Annex 1 was there to show what you were thinking in July.   But I updated that Annex 1 text to reflect some ideas to consider before bringing back all of your July work for the next version, which is in Section B.     (see updated Google Doc)

Sorry if that isn’t exactly what you wanted, but I didn’t want to paste a whole block from Annex 1 into section B before we discuss as a group.

—Steve


From: <wp1-bounces at icann.org<mailto:wp1-bounces at icann.org>> on behalf of Jordan Carter
Date: Monday, September 14, 2015 at 12:37 AM
To: "wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>"
Subject: [WP1] WP1 meeting - 19h UTC on 14 Sep

Hi all

I realise that many of you are taking time to read and digest the feedback so we are keeping the meeting very simple on the 14th.

Here is a link to a google doc you could helpfully look at before the meeting:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ja7jj-9z4QSYyFV5puZM6NC_zWt36VhxXRQQUWwOPzM/edit

It is meant to be a place for you to add your thoughts about the subject of how we make the Community Forum part of the Second Draft Proposal more comprehensive.

Jorge's comments are there.

The doc is set to tracked changes so.... please feel free to add your thoughts!

We will discuss the issue and record thoughts from the call in the same document.

The rest of the doc contains a copy of what we put in the second draft proposal as a base to update and amend; then the wording precisely as in the Second Draft Proposal for the record; and then the earlier draft we had done which did have more precision.


Speak with you soon,

Jordan


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