[WP2] revised IRP checklist based on call

[James Gannon]

Some small edits and a suggestion that I had thought about in Paris but forgot to put it out on the list.

-James

From: wp2-bounces at icann.org [mailto:wp2-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Matthew Shears
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And a couple of comments on section 6 on the panel based on our discussion on yesterday's call.  Hope they make sense.

Matthew
On 7/23/2015 2:29 AM, McAuley, David wrote:
Hi Becky,

I have been out of the loop these past four hours for a family matter, celebration.

I offer a few comments attached in track changes.

Thanks all, especially Becky, for the incredible work on this today.

David McAuley


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Importance: High

Please review and comment.  Note that some things are highlighted for further discussion.

Also, please review Greg's proposed bylaw markup - I think it is a very handy tool to make sure we've covered the basic bases.

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