[Wp4] WP4 Deliverable: Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human RIghts

[Avri Doria]

Hi,

I can accept this

Thanks for the effort.

avri


On 03-Nov-15 10:36, Greg Shatan wrote:
> All:
>
> Attached are Word and PDF versions of a proposed final draft of the
> deliverable of WP4, which is intended to become part of the next
> Report of the CCWG.
>
> Niels and Tatiana and Matt went through the document after our call
> and edited and resolved the proposed changes in the document.  I
> followed with further edits and formatting work.  I believe that all
> of us sought to be neutral /rapporteurs/ carrying out the sense of
> today's call and the work of our group.
>
> I felt that we needed a section which specifically set out the process
> and results of our discussions on refining the language of the Bylaw,
> rather than leaving this to our recommendations in the final section
> of the document.  Therefore, I took the liberty of creating such a
> section, and hope that you will find that this section reflects our work.
>
> This document also remains available on Google Drive.
>
> I look forward to any comments.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Greg
>
>
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