[Wp4] Human Rights PC2 draft for CCWG comment

[Nigel Roberts]

PS: This is a great effort in drawing our sometimes diverse discussion 
together. Good job!


On 13/10/15 08:01, Greg Shatan wrote:
> All,
>
> Here is the completed, revised version of the Human Rights PC2 Analysis.  I
> look forward to talking with you soon.
>
> Note to members of WP4:  I cut the discussion of the two alternative
> formulations of the bylaw, which we essentially rejected, and each of which
> had very limited support in the public comments, but the full discussion
> remains in the Google Docs version so we can use it in another document.
>
> Note also that I went through the survey results carefully (twice) and came
> up with slightly different results than Leon, but nothing that changes the
> shape of the results too significantly.
>
> Greg
>
> On Mon, Oct 12, 2015 at 11:15 PM, León Felipe Sánchez Ambía <
> leonfelipe at sanchez.mx> wrote:
>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> I want to thank you all for the excellent work carried in this second
>> public comment analysis draft. Although I remained silent I followed the
>> discussion closely and tried to capture it in some minor additions I made
>> to this new version of our draft to be submitted to the CCWG for review.
>>
>> I specially thank Nigel, Niels, Tatiana, Greg, Avri, Ellen, Kavouss, David
>> and Mathew for their work and feedback to reach this document.
>>
>> I encourage you to please review this version which will be submitted as
>> our deliverable to the CCWG and I also remind you that should there be the
>> need to make any further adjustments, we can do so anytime before having to
>> submit a final version to be included in the next version of the CCWG’s
>> draft proposal.
>>
>> Attached is a word and PDF version of this latest draft.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>>
>>
>> León
>>
>>
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