[CCWG-ACCT] COMMENTS/EDITS by 17:00 UTC today - Draft statement - Frankfurt Meeting

[Eric Brunner-Williams]

Editorial comment:

The first sentence of the Background section could reasonably end after 
the word "Government". The subsequent comma and comment detract from the 
clarity of the scope statement.

Eric Brunner-Williams
Eugene, Oregon

On 1/22/15 5:07 AM, Alice Jansen wrote:
> Dear all,
> On behalf of the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs, please find attached a 
> draft statement (Frankfurt – 19-20 January) for your consideration.
> Please flag any edits and/or comments you may have by* today – 
> Thursday, 22 January - **17:00 UTC*.
> Thank you
> Best regards
> Alice
>
>
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