[CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear All,
I have not finish edits .I am on page 50. However, in view of time time
constrain, I have an important edit that is attached.
The same edit should be carried forward elsewhere  throughout the entire
document . please then search for " private sector led " and DELETE THAT .
I mentioned in one of the call .See Attached doc.
Regards


2015-05-02 3:34 GMT+02:00 Samantha Eisner <Samantha.Eisner at icann.org>:

>  Thanks Grace.
>
>  Dear CCWG,
> Attached please find some proposed edits for consideration.
>
>  Best,
>
>  Sam
>
>   From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
> Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM
> To: Accountability Cross Community <
> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
> Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May
> at 01:00 UTC
>
>   Hi all,
> Just a reminder than edits, comments are due in approximately 3h. Thank
> you to those who sent edits earlier today.  If you must send late edits,
> please send a note to the Chairs* with staff in copy* to give us notice
> that your comments will be delayed. Best to stick to the deadline, but we
> know everyone is working hard to get this draft report ready, and we’d
> rather get your comments than not at all.
> Have a good weekend,
> Grace
>
>   From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
> Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM
> To: Accountability Cross Community <
> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
> Subject: Re: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC
>
>   Dear all,
>
>  We sent the V10 draft report earlier today (in UTC) but have been
> notified that, in some cases, the files are too large to download from the
> email attachments. As a reminder, the draft (redline and clean versions)
> are posted on the Wiki:
> https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report.
>
>  Looking forward to receiving your comments and edits,
> Grace
>
>   From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
> Date: Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM
> To: Accountability Cross Community <
> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
> Subject: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC
>
>   Dear all,
>
>  Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have
> attached a redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF).
>
>  Version 10 incorporates the following:
>
>    - Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at
>    05:00 UTC
>    - Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)
>    - Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding
>    incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations
>    - Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs
>
> Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list by*Saturday 2
> May 01:00 UTC* (24h from now). Staff will incorporate the edits over the
> weekend so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4
> May. *If possible, edits are appreciate in track changes in the clean
> version so that they are clearly marked and visible. *There will be
> professional formatting and copyediting done before publication, so we
> suggest that your time my be best spent by focusing on the
> substance-related edits.
>
>  Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane
> graphics by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane.
>
>  Almost there!
> — Grace
>
>
>
>
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