[CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

[Rudolph Daniel]

Kavouss et AL

Extremely important totally agree. The remainder of the report will hang on
that or be hung is not righted.
RD


On May 2, 2015 3:36 AM, "Kavouss Arasteh" <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> IMPORTANT AND URGENT
>
> Dear co-chairs,
>
> Thank you very much for your enormous and tireless efforts to put this
doc. for final comments
>
> I have had many comments but I could not finish the edits till now.
>
> I therefore do not wish to delay the work.
>
> However, I have one VERY IMPORTANT edit that I raised it in my last
e-mail.
>
> That edit is relating to a reference to ICANN or Internet Process as
being «private led  multistakeholder”  organization or process.
>
> This is a mistake. a big mistake. There is no such preference to one
category of stakeholder over other categories of stakeholder (private or
public) .
>
> I raised this matter at one of our call and asked for deletion of that
term.
>
> All stakeholder, irrespective being private, public, and etc. SHALL  be
treated equally. This issue was raised at various occasions by NTIA
indicating / emphasizing that no single category of the stakeholder should
benefit from preference over other categories of stakeholders .This term
was used at very early stage of the introduction of the ICANN into the
business. Over the time when we discussed that the process should be
inclusive, democratic, then it was agreed by everybody that no category of
the stakeholder should have any preference, what so ever, or should have
  a preferred treatment over other categories of the stakeholders.
>
> In view of the above, I urge you to  kindly correct such a big mistake
which if it is not corrected would put us in a very delicate situation that
we did not respect impartiality and neutrality in treating  various
categories of the stakeholders.
>
> There are 4 or 5 times that such a reference to »private led
multistakeholder  are referred to in the doc.
>
> Pls kindly make a simple «find" check and delete all that.  Term in other
part of doc. whenever, so as reference is maded to multistakeholder there
is no such an incorrect and discriminative preference.
>
> Regards
>
> Kavouss
>
>
> 2015-05-02 9:01 GMT+02:00 Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>:
>>
>> Dear All,
>> I have not finish edits .I am on page 50. However, in view of time time
constrain, I have an important edit that is attached.
>> The same edit should be carried forward elsewhere  throughout the entire
document . please then search for " private sector led " and DELETE THAT .
I mentioned in one of the call .See Attached doc.
>> Regards
>>
>>
>> 2015-05-02 3:34 GMT+02:00 Samantha Eisner <Samantha.Eisner at icann.org>:
>>>
>>> Thanks Grace.
>>>
>>> Dear CCWG,
>>> Attached please find some proposed edits for consideration.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Sam
>>>
>>> From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
>>> Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM
>>> To: Accountability Cross Community <
accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>>> Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2
May at 01:00 UTC
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>> Just a reminder than edits, comments are due in approximately 3h. Thank
you to those who sent edits earlier today.  If you must send late edits,
please send a note to the Chairs with staff in copy to give us notice that
your comments will be delayed. Best to stick to the deadline, but we know
everyone is working hard to get this draft report ready, and we’d rather
get your comments than not at all.
>>> Have a good weekend,
>>> Grace
>>>
>>> From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
>>> Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM
>>> To: Accountability Cross Community <
accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>>> Subject: Re: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC
>>>
>>> Dear all,
>>>
>>> We sent the V10 draft report earlier today (in UTC) but have been
notified that, in some cases, the files are too large to download from the
email attachments. As a reminder, the draft (redline and clean versions)
are posted on the Wiki:
https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report.
>>>
>>> Looking forward to receiving your comments and edits,
>>> Grace
>>>
>>> From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
>>> Date: Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM
>>> To: Accountability Cross Community <
accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>>> Subject: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC
>>>
>>> Dear all,
>>>
>>> Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have
attached a redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF).
>>>
>>> Version 10 incorporates the following:
>>> Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at 05:00
UTC
>>> Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)
>>> Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding
incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations
>>> Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs
>>> Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list bySaturday 2
May 01:00 UTC (24h from now). Staff will incorporate the edits over the
weekend so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4
May. If possible, edits are appreciate in track changes in the clean
version so that they are clearly marked and visible. There will be
professional formatting and copyediting done before publication, so we
suggest that your time my be best spent by focusing on the
substance-related edits.
>>>
>>> Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane
graphics by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane.
>>>
>>> Almost there!
>>> — Grace
>>>
>>>
>>>
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