[CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)

matthew shears mshears at cdt.org
Wed Jul 6 21:43:47 UTC 2016


Agree - I think it would make sense that we spend a little more time 
ensuring that the restated AoI do reflect the intent and language of the 
new bylaws.

Matthew


On 06/07/2016 22:24, James Gannon wrote:
> Hi All,
> In light of this and some other conversations I think that we need to 
> take at least 24hours to review this comment and ensure that it is a 
> consensus comment of the CCWG before we file it, Im not sure if a 
> 24-48hr delay in the filing of the CCWG comment would have a major 
> impact downstream in the timelines, I have cc’d Trang and Yuko who may 
> be able to respond to that.
>
> I think that we may have let the AoI slip under our radar a little 
> with all of the parallel work that is going on and we need to make 
> sure that we get this comment correct first time and to do that we nee 
> to do it with a full set of inputs and considerations by the CCWG 
> members and I don’t feel we have this yet. I know that we are working 
> to tight deadlines, but we need to make sure that we do this right.
>
> -JG
>
> From: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com 
> <mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com>>
> Date: Wednesday 6 July 2016 at 21:45
> To: James Gannon <james at cyberinvasion.net 
> <mailto:james at cyberinvasion.net>>
> Cc: "Gregory, Holly" <holly.gregory at sidley.com 
> <mailto:holly.gregory at sidley.com>>, Thomas Rickert <thomas at rickert.net 
> <mailto:thomas at rickert.net>>, Mathieu Weill <mathieu.weill at afnic.fr 
> <mailto:mathieu.weill at afnic.fr>>, "leonfelipe at sanchez.mx 
> <mailto:leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>" <leonfelipe at sanchez.mx 
> <mailto:leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>>, Accountability Cross Community 
> <accountability-cross-community at icann.org 
> <mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>, Bernard Turcotte 
> <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com <mailto:turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>>
> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for 
> Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)
>
> It's unfortunate that we don't have time to run this by our counsel, 
> as I would be interested in their views.  Here are mine.
>
> I would recommend against filing these comments.
>
> FIRST, I disagree with the second point raised.  Substituting "shall" 
> for "may" would incorrectly imply that there is a _requirement_ that a 
> determination of the global public interest _must_ take place.  We 
> have not asked for such a requirement and we have not specified any 
> such requirement, which would render this statement nebulous, 
> ambiguous and undefined.  As currently drafted, /if/ a determination 
> of the global public interest takes place it will be done by the 
> multistakeholder community using a bottom-up multistakeholder process, 
> but there is (properly) no language _requiring_ that such a 
> determination be made.
>
> If anyone believes that Final Recommendation 1, para 51 _requires_ the 
> initiation of a process to determine the global public interest, that 
> should either be a part of Work Stream 2 or a huge implementation 
> item for Work Stream 1.  As far as I can see, it is neither -- which 
> further proves that changing "may" to "shall" goes beyond the 
> recommendations of the CCWG.
>
> SECOND, I also disagree with the third point raised. "Organized" is 
> commonly used in Articles of Incorporation (indeed, in some states, 
> such as Massachusetts, a non-profit corporation files Articles of 
> Organization rather than Articles of Incorporation).  As our counsel 
> pointed out on the last call, the California official form for 
> Articles of Incorporation uses the term "organized." (See attached) 
>  It is a best practice to stick closely to the official language 
> provided by the jurisdiction -- here it is "organized."  This is 
> demonstrated in model California Articles of Incorporation prepared by 
> Public Counsel, a pro bono law firm, and available online (see 
> attached or http://www.publiccounsel.org/publications?id=0059). It 
> would be far preferable if we were to accept the clarification that 
> "organized" is what's used in this circumstance, rather than to 
> recommend a change that is at best meaningless and at worst creates 
> the potential for confusion (since one always looks for meaning in any 
> change, and confusion could fill the void created by the 
> meaninglessness of this change).  To paraphrase Shakespeare, I don't 
> think the confusion is in the document, it is in ourselves (or at 
> least in some of us) -- and it would be better for us to adjust our 
> understanding of the document, rather than to adjust the document to 
> suit our misunderstanding.
>
> Of course, the language of the CCWG comment is relatively undemanding 
> -- we only ask that "counsel" (whose counsel?  ICANN's?) or "the 
> drafters" (why the difference?) review the language.  We do not 
> justify our quasi-recommendations of changes, other than by saying 
> that we are confused by the word "organized" and by demonstrating that 
> we are confused about what is permissive and what is required.
>
> Frankly, I'm far from sure that this comment is widely supported, 
> other than by apathy or lack of time.  I think it would be a mistake 
> for either of these two recommendations (?) to be adopted, and I hope 
> that counsel/the drafters, upon further review, let the original 
> drafting stand.
>
> The only thing I agree with is the trivial change from "further" to 
> "future," which at least does not make matters worse. This is hardly 
> worth a comment by itself.
>
> In sum, I reiterate that I would recommend against filing these comments.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Greg
>
> On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 3:49 PM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com 
> <mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
>     I agree. This is a legal document, and we should have the benefit
>     of counsel on this.
>
>     Greg
>
>     On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 3:36 PM, James Gannon
>     <james at cyberinvasion.net <mailto:james at cyberinvasion.net>> wrote:
>
>         While not able to certify anything, if there are issues that
>         our counsel see I think its important that they are raised.
>
>         -James
>
>         From: <accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org
>         <mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org>> on
>         behalf of "Gregory, Holly" <holly.gregory at sidley.com
>         <mailto:holly.gregory at sidley.com>>
>         Date: Wednesday 6 July 2016 at 20:32
>         To: Thomas Rickert <thomas at rickert.net
>         <mailto:thomas at rickert.net>>, Mathieu Weill
>         <mathieu.weill at afnic.fr <mailto:mathieu.weill at afnic.fr>>,
>         "leonfelipe at sanchez.mx <mailto:leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>"
>         <leonfelipe at sanchez.mx <mailto:leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>>,
>         Accountability Cross Community
>         <accountability-cross-community at icann.org
>         <mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>, Bernard
>         Turcotte <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com
>         <mailto:turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>>
>         Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment
>         for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)
>
>         Dear Co-Chairs and CCWG-Accountability Members and
>         Participants, Please let us know if you want Sidley and/or
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>         so unless instructed to.  Holly
>
>         *HOLLY J. GREGORY*
>         Partner and Co-Chair, Global Corporate Governance & Executive
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>         *From:*accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org
>         <mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org>
>         [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org] *On
>         Behalf Of *Bernard Turcotte
>         *Sent:* Wednesday, July 06, 2016 3:27 PM
>         *To:* Accountability Cross Community
>         *Subject:* [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for
>         Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)
>
>         All,
>
>         Please find attached the draft comment to the ICANN public
>         consultation on the Articles of Incorporation from the leadership.
>
>         These comments are based on the questions raised during the
>         CCWG meeting on the AOC and in consideration of Sam Eisner's
>         response to those questions.
>
>         Please respond to the list ASAP if you have comments as this
>         public consultation closes in a few hours.
>
>         Bernard Turcotte
>
>         ICANN Staff Support for the CCWG Co-Chairs.
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