[arabic-vip] Version 1.0

[Andrew Sullivan]

And now, with the attachment.  Sigh.

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On Wed, Oct 05, 2011 at 10:47:44AM -0400, Andrew Sullivan wrote:
> Dear colleagues,
> 
> On Wed, Oct 05, 2011 at 02:21:22PM +0500, Sarmad Hussain wrote:
> > They have all been incorporated in this version 1.0.  If anything is still left unaddressed, please feel free to comment.   
> > 
> 
> I went through this version very carefully.  I made no substantive
> comments.
> 
> I made several tiny changes for idiomatic usage.  There are several
> places where I changed "which" to "that", or conversely, particularly
> with an eye to an American audience (people used to English often
> don't get as worked up about the distinction, but Americans in my
> experience have a rather strict rule about this and will be distracted
> if the wrong word is used.  I'm far from infallible on detecting
> these, but I think I caught the ones that will make readers twitch).
> In a few other places I adjusted the use of articles or added them.
> 
> I made many comments about formatting issues where I spotted them.
> 
> Good work!
> 
> Best,
> 
> A
> 
> -- 
> Andrew Sullivan
> ajs at anvilwalrusden.com
> 

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Andrew Sullivan
ajs at crankycanuck.ca
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