[CWG-Stewardship] Important: Final Proposal for review until 23:59 UTC on 10 June

Thu Jun 11 00:34:15 UTC 2015

Each means both in this sentence. (A bill requires approval of each house
of Congress before it is sent to the President.)
Either would mean one or the other.

That said both also works.

On Wednesday, June 10, 2015, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
wrote:

>  A few minutes late, but...
>
> In paragraph 125, page 24 of V4, I can live with the current wording about
> the optional Public Comment but meaningful AC/SO consultation.
>
> However, the wording change I requested to clarify that the BOTH the ccNSO
> and GNSO approval is needed was not made.
>
> ...triggered by a supermajority vote of each of the ccNSO and GNSO
> Councils ...
>
> should read
>
> ...triggered by a supermajority vote of BOTH of the ccNSO and GNSO
> Councils...
>
> (Caps added to highlight the change in this message. The "of" following
> "both" is probably not needed.)
>
> Alan
>
>
> At 09/06/2015 10:59 PM, Grace Abuhamad wrote:
>
> Forwarding again to Client Committee.
>
> From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org
> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','grace.abuhamad at icann.org');> >
> Date: Tuesday, June 9, 2015 at 5:46 PM
> To: Brenda Brewer <brenda.brewer at icann.org
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> cwg-stewardship at icann.org
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> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Important: Final Proposal for review until
> 23:59UTC on 10 June
>
> Dear all,
>
> During our meeting today, we had our 3rd and final reading of the
> Proposal. Changes were made live, and outstanding changes were noted as
> action items (see notes below). The staff team has reviewed the proposal
> and completed all actions listed. Please note that Sidley will provide a
> final review as well which includes some work on the implementation text in
> Section IV and the Term Sheet in Annex S.
>
> *With this, the CWG-Stewardship now enters into a final review period that
> lasts until 23:59 UTC tomorrow (10 June)*. As noted on the call, the
> intention of the review period is to do a ‘proofread’ and notify the group
> of any errors. During this period of 26 hours, any statements or comments
> on the Proposal may also be sent to the group. As the Chairs noted on the
> call, if you are making a statement, please be sure to identify whether you
> do so as a member on behalf of a Chartering Organization, as an individual
> representing a specific organization, or as an individual with a personal
> remark/contribution.
>
> After 23:59 UTC on 10 June, the Chairs will work with staff to rectify any
> errors, update section VI.C. regarding statements, and deliver the Proposal
> to the Chartering Organizations on 11 June. Our call on 11 June will focus
> on how the CWG-Stewardship does its engagement, through its members and
> participants, to coalesce support for the Proposal among Chartering
> Organizations. In addition, there are two webinars on 11 June (one at 06:00
> UTC and one at 13:00 UTC):
> https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-06-03-en. These webinars aim
> to provide a briefing to the broader community about the contents of the
> final proposal. Finally, as we head into ICANN53 in Buenos Aires, please
> refer to the schedule of sessions that relate to the CWG-Stewardship work:
> https://community.icann.org/x/EJg0Aw.
>
> Thank you all for your great work and dedication to the process. Please
> contact us if you have any questions regarding the process or
> administration over the next 48h.
>
> Best,
> Gramika (Grace+Marika)
>
>
> From: Brenda Brewer <brenda.brewer at icann.org
> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','brenda.brewer at icann.org');> >
> Date: Tuesday, June 9, 2015 at 4:01 PM
> To: " cwg-stewardship at icann.org
> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','cwg-stewardship at icann.org');>" <
> cwg-stewardship at icann.org
> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','cwg-stewardship at icann.org');>>
> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Notes, Recordings, Transcript CWG IANA #58 9
> June 2015
>
> [image: []]
> Dear all,
>
> The notes, recordings and transcripts for the CWG IANA Meeting # 58 on 9
> June 2015 are available here:
> https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=53778032
>
> Kind regards,
> Brenda
>
>
>
> *Action Items*
>
>
>
>
> *Paragraph 108:  Action: In document text, remove --> "as it is customary"
> *
>
> *Paragraph 134:  Action: conform text to the defined terms used in the
> rest of the Proposal, among other things *
>
> *Paragraph 155: Action: remove capitals in "standing committee" *
>
> *Section IV: Action: Sidley to provide text on PTI implementation. *
>
> *Annex H: Action: remove escalation paragraph and preamble *
>
> *Annex J: Action: edits to #3 should be cross-checked with CSC Charter *
>
> *Action: conform text to the defined terms used in the rest of the
> Proposal, among other things *
>
> *Notes*
>
>
>
>
> *1. Opening Remarks *·        A big thanks to all who contributed to
> edits.
> ·        Following closure of this meeting, staff will send final
> document  to the CWG.
> ·        CWG will then have 24h to notify the group of any errors.
> Intention is not to reopen issues, but to focus on proofing --> DUE AT
> 23:59 UTC on 10 JUNE
> ·        Chairs will transmit to SO/ACs on 11 June with covering note.
>
>
> *2. Finalizing the Review Tool & Responses *
> Can expect a final version to be circulated in the next 24h. Staff is
> working on consistency-checking across the responses. The document is
> frozen as of 1 June.
>
>
> *3. Update on questions to ICANN Finance & Legal *
> The letter and responses from ICANN are posted on Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/7Jk0Aw.
> <https://community.icann.org/x/7Jk0Aw>
>
> Staff have included the responses in Section IV (and included an Annex to
> for the Finance information).
>
>
> *4. Last Review of Final Proposal *
> On screen now is version 5. The difference between the previous version
> and the latest is that the Chairs took some time to review which items were
> still open and which had been resolved. Tried to focus CWG on the key
> outstanding issues. This latest version also includes the DT-A annex which
> has now been included.
>
> *Paragraph 108*: Change the wording from "ringfence" to "isolate" and
> remove the definition in the footnote.  ICANN has control and ownership of
> PTI and the implementation documents will assure against further transfer
> out of assets.
>
> Action: In document text, remove --> "as it is customary"
>
> *Paragraph 121/ Footnote 11*: footnote is satisfactory.
>
> *Paragraph 125*: make clear "supermajority from both" ccNSO and GNSO.
> Also including the CSC as part of the remit.
>
> *Paragraph 128*: covered by resolution in paragraph 121
>
> *Paragraph 134*: SLEs discussion -- principles are included in annex and
> summary is included in the section now.
>
> Action: conform text to the defined terms used in the rest of the
> Proposal, among other things
>
> *Paragraph 155*: Action: remove capitals in "standing committee"
>
> *Section IV*: Action: Sidley to provide text on PTI implementation.
>
> *Annex G*: edit to the Remedial Action Procedures table
>
> *Annex H*: Action: remove escalation paragraph and preamble
>
> *Annex J*: Action: edits to #3 should be cross-checked with CSC Charter
>
> *Term Sheet*: staff to revise with comments from Sidley and Greg
>
> 5. Overall Timeline / Milestones
>
>     a. Communications
>
>     b. Webinars on 11 June
>
>     c. Sessions at ICANN 53
>
> 6. AOB
>
>     a. Thursday 11 June -- 1 hour call about CWG engagement
>
>     b. Canceling Tuesday 16 June call
>
>     c. Client Committee on Friday 12 June
>
> 7. Closing Remarks
>
> After proposal is sent, 24h to respond with comments or statements DUE AT
> 23:59 UTC on 10 JUNE
>
>
>
>
>
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