[Gnso-epdp-team] Text error in current Final Report draft

[Mark Svancarek (CELA)]

Hi, in reviewing the current text, I've discovered an error in line 156.  I've included the surrounding text for context.

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The GDPR protects natural persons in relation to the processing of their personal data. The GDPR does not cover the processing of personal data which concerns legal persons and in particular undertakings established as legal persons, including the name and the form of the legal person and the contact details of the legal person[Recital 14,  GDPR]
The GDPR protects natural persons in relation to the processing of their personal data. The GDPR does not cover the processing of personal data which concerns legal persons and in particular undertakings established as legal persons, including the name and the form of the legal person and the contact details of the legal person[Recital 14,  GDPR]
156 - 160
This generally allows for disclosure of legal persons' data because it is outside  the remit of GDPR; however, when processing legal persons' data, Contracted Parties  should put safeguards in place to ensure that personally identifying data about a  natural person is not disclosed within data marked as a legal person, as this is an  example of information that is within the scope of GDPR.
This generally allows for publication of legal persons' data because it is outside  the remit of GDPR; however, when processing legal persons' data, Contracted Parties  should put safeguards in place to ensure that personally identifying data about a  natural person is not disclosed within data marked as a legal person, as this is an  example of information that is within the scope of GDPR.
160 - 162
For more information on this  distinction, please refer to the letter from the European Data Protection Board,  beginning on p. 4.
For more information on this  distinction, please refer to the letter from the European Data Protection Board,  beginning on p. 4.

Thanks in advance for fixing this.


Mark Svancarek
Principal Program Manager, Corporate Standards Group
Privacy & Regulatory Affairs
Microsoft
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