[Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear Manal,
Thank you very much for the good work that was done.
I was identified to be part of small group on the matter.
There are some inconsistencies that I HAVE EDITED.
Moreover, there are overlapping and superflous paragraphs that while is
harmless but do not seem necessary.
However, I have not touched that .
See attachment with revision marks
Regards
Kavouss


2015-02-22 16:28 GMT+01:00 Manal Ismail <manal at tra.gov.eg>:

> Many thanks Daniel for your response and your cooperation ..
> In case of no other comments, appreciate if our chair and co-chairs can
> put this into action ..
>
> Kind Regards
> --Manal
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Daniel Karrenberg [mailto:daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net]
> Sent: Friday, February 20, 2015 2:23 PM
> To: Manal Ismail; internal-cg at icann.org
> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Steps for handling ICG forum comments ..
>
> On 17.02.15 13:06 , Manal Ismail wrote:
> > Dear All ..
> >
> > Please find attached stepsfor handling community comments received on
> > ICG Forum..
> >
> > I hope this accuratelyreflectsthe discussion we had in Singapore ..
> >
> > I have createda new document as it describes a different approach and
> > was too messy intrack changes ..
> >
> > The old draft is still on Dropbox, if you wishto reference..
> >
> > I have to clarify that this has not been discussed yet among the
> > smaller group agreed in Singapore, but is being shared for the sake of
> time ..
> >
> > Hope to have this settled soon ..
> >
> > Kind Regards
> >
> > --Manal
>
>
>
> Manal,
>
>
> thank you very much for driving this along.
>
> "Handling community comments submitted to the ICG Forum Discussion Draft
> based on Singapore Meeting
> 11 February 2015 - V.1"
>
> is excellent and I recommend that we adopt it.
>
> Daniel
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