[Rt4-whois] FW: Discussion paper, draft final version [SEC=UNCLASSIFIED]

[Nettlefold, Peter]

Hi again,

Well, I just printed it out and was about to put in a folder when I noticed another typo - a missing 'should' in the last question. Again, I've made the insertion in track.

Hopefully that's it from me.

Cheers,

Peter



From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Nettlefold, Peter
Sent: Thursday, 9 June 2011 12:01 PM
To: Olof Nordling; rt4-whois at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Discussion paper, draft final version

Hi all,

Thanks for sending this through so quickly Olof, and thanks to all for contributing to what has become a very good paper.

In reading it just now, I noticed a tiny typo in last night's additions (a double space, and also I think a missing 'the'). I also noticed that the applicable laws/privacy heading was sitting at the bottom of a page while all the content was on the next page. I fixed those in track, and I hope they're as uncontroversial as they seemed to me.

The only other thing I noticed is two unfinished sentences in the intro which were placeholders for a closing date for submissions and an address to send submissions. I couldn't remember if we'd already discussed this, so I just highlighted the sentences yellow so that they get sorted before it's sent out.

Other than that, it all looks good to me and I look forward to seeing responses as they come in.

Cheers,

Peter

From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Olof Nordling
Sent: Wednesday, 8 June 2011 11:57 PM
To: rt4-whois at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Discussion paper, draft final version

Dear Review Team members,
Oh well, I found two errors in the version I just posted to you - apologies for that, my mistakes. Please replace with the attached version, where they are corrected.
Very best regards
Olof

From: rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Olof Nordling
Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2011 3:37 PM
To: rt4-whois at icann.org
Subject: [Rt4-whois] Discussion paper, draft final version

Dear Review Team members,
Please find an updated version of the Discussion Paper, as edited at the call earlier today.
This is the draft final version, so please read carefully and react promptly if any errors or omissions are found.
Very best regards
Alice and Olof

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