[Rt4-whois] FW: FW: Whois RT Draft report

[LEMON, Sharon]

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All,

A late arrival from Canada - I can't find the tracked changes - does anyone know what this means?

These suggested corrections are reflected in the Word Tracking feature under the #000035590 code. The Comments are identified more clearly (under Fred and my name).

In fact, I can't even open the document, computer says 'No'. The only other point they make is that the document is too long.

Sharon

Sharon LEMON OBE
Deputy Director
Cyber and Forensics
Serious and Organised Crime Agency (SOCA)
07768 290902
0207 855 2800

   Hello Shona/Gary,

Further to your earlier message please be advised that Lieutenant Frédérick (Fred) Gaudreau, Sûreté du Québec, and I have reviewed the WHOIS Policy RT - Draft document and have identified suggested corrections/comments that we would respectfully submit for your consideration. These suggested corrections are reflected in the Word Tracking feature under the #000035590 code. The Comments are identified more clearly (under Fred and my name).

Please note that we did not have sufficient time to review the Appendices document.

We recognize the importance of this document and fully appreciate everyone's efforts in putting this together. However we would humbly submit that perhaps the document would have more impact if it were strategically focused to within a 15-20 page document. The Appendices document would also need to be downsized but it could include additional information currently in the main draft Policy document. We feel this would ensure to highlight the main issues and this would in turn ensure to provide the reader with all the relevant information surrounding the WHOIS issue.

Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions.


Marc


S/Sgt Marc Moreau, s-é-m
Royal Canadian Mounted Police/Gendarmerie royale du Canada
Strategic Communications and Liaison Officer, Technological Crime Branch,
Spécialiste en Communication et Agent de liaison, Sous-direction de la criminalité technologique,
1426 St. Joseph Blvd., Rm 2200
Ottawa, Ontario K1A 0R2
Ph.  (613) 993-6011
Fax  (613) 993-2963>>> "McINTOSH, Shona" <shona.mcintosh at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk> 11/25/2011 8:59 AM >>>

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Dear All

 Please see attached;  the latest version of the Whois Review Team Report.  Please can you have a read, and make any comments you feel necessary.

Instructions for comment: Rather than track changes, can any changes please be inserted directly into the text, highlighted in yellow and your initials added at the end?

The deadline for this back to me / Gary is GMT 1200 on 29th November.  Apologies for the tight timescale.

Shona McIntosh l
Staff Officer to Sharon Lemon |
Serious Organised Crime Agency l +44(0)20 78552941
07717347907 | shona.mcintosh at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk


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