[Rt4-whois] WHOIS Policy RT - Law Enforcement comments.

Wed Nov 30 14:51:33 UTC 2011

Great - thanks Sharon

Alice - please amend the latest draft of the report to show this definition
of law enforcement.

Alice - Please also update the DNS intro and move it out to an appendix.

On 30 November 2011 14:46, LEMON, Sharon <sharon.lemon at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk>wrote:

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> Emily,
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> Happy with this definition:
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> Any entity charged or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or
> ensuring observance of or obedience to the law; an organised body of people
> officially maintained or employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime
> and enforce the law
>
> Moving intro to DNS to Appendices good ideas. Alice had the latest
> version, with Lutz's included.
>
> Sharon
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> Sharon LEMON OBE
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>  -----Original Message-----
> *From:* Emily Taylor [mailto:emily at emilytaylor.eu]
> *Sent:* 30 November 2011 14:30
> *To:* LEMON, Sharon
> *Cc:* rt4-whois at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [Rt4-whois] WHOIS Policy RT - Law Enforcement comments.
>
> Hi Sharon
>
> Thanks for working through this.
>
> Sorry to say it, but I will - I don't think your new version of the law
> enf. definition will work.  It includes the world and his wife.  Can I have
> your snap response to the following proposal:
>
> Any entity charged or otherwise mandated by governments with enforcing or
> ensuring observance of or obedience to the law; an organised body of people
> officially maintained or employed to keep order, prevent or detect crime
> and enforce the law.
>
> Unfortunately, your colleague from Canada was working to quite an old
> draft, which has been superseded several times over.  I can see the
> comments, and note what is said about impact.  We have been discussing
> moving chunks into appendices.  Would the intro to the domain name system
> be a good candidate?
>
> Can you give me finalised text for that section, please, which
> incorporates the latest comments made by Lutz and others - this version
> seems to be based on an older draft.
>
> The comments from Gary and others later in the text, and gap analysis are
> good.  I'd like to see how we can incorporate some of them. At the moment
> my priorities are to get the bits lining up in the right places, and have
> the executive summary, findings and recommendations agreed.
>
> Kind regards
>
> Emily
>
> On 30 November 2011 13:48, LEMON, Sharon <sharon.lemon at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk>wrote:
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>> Dear Emily, Alice and All,
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>> Sorry for arriving at the party late, I have been watching in awe the
>> hundreds of emails flying about.  We gave until today for our international
>> colleagues to comment and we have just had our own internal meeting to
>> finalise the comments on the paper.
>>
>> The paper complemented our ongoing law enforcement work within the ICANN
>> community and there are not comments of major significance -ours are in
>> green.  I know that Alice is currently going through the nightmare of
>> trying to organise the version control. (Good Luck and thanks Alice).
>> I have replaced the definition of law enforcement with:
>>
>> Any entity with a responsibility to enforce or ensure observance to or
>> obedience of the law, whether mandated by government or otherwise.
>>
>> We could go on forever with this - but let me know if there are any show
>> stopping objections.
>>
>> I hope we make the deadline of 5pm ;-)
>>
>> Sharon
>>
>>
>> Sharon LEMON OBE
>> Deputy Director
>> Cyber and Forensics
>> Serious and Organised Crime Agency (SOCA)
>> 07768 290902
>> 0207 855 2800
>>  -----Original Message-----
>> *From:* KIBBEY, Gary
>> *Sent:* 30 November 2011 13:16
>> *To:* LEMON, Sharon
>> *Subject:* FW: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean
>> CC GK Comments
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>> Gary Kibbey/ Senior Manager
>> Cyber
>> Serious Organised Crime Agency / Tel +44(0)207 855 2863 +44(0)7876790990
>> gary.kibbey at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk
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>>  -----Original Message-----
>> *From:* FLAHERTY, Jonathan
>> *Sent:* 29 November 2011 17:54
>> *To:* KIBBEY, Gary; ADDIS, Benedict
>> *Cc:* CURLEY, Cliona
>> *Subject:* RE: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean
>> CC GK Comments
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>> My comments added.
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>> *Jon Flaherty | HVOM | SOCA Cyber & Forensics | 0207 855 2808 | 07919
>> 218439 | jonathan.flaherty at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk*
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>>  -----Original Message-----
>> *From:* KIBBEY, Gary
>> *Sent:* 29 November 2011 14:34
>> *To:* FLAHERTY, Jonathan; ADDIS, Benedict
>> *Cc:* CURLEY, Cliona
>> *Subject:* FW: Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean
>> CC GK Comments
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>> Gents
>>
>> If you have any comments -can you drop onto this working copy. Don't
>> track changes - just comments.
>>
>> Ta
>>
>> Gary
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>>
>>
>> Gary Kibbey/ Senior Manager
>> Cyber
>> Serious Organised Crime Agency / Tel +44(0)207 855 2863 +44(0)7876790990
>> gary.kibbey at soca.x.gsi.gov.uk
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>>  -----Original Message-----
>> *From:* KIBBEY, Gary
>> *Sent:* 29 November 2011 14:31
>> *To:* KIBBEY, Gary
>> *Subject:* Emailing: WHOIS Policy RT - Draft report - 24 Nov - Clean CC
>> GK Comments
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