[Rt4-whois] Master document V2.1 -

[Alice Jansen]

Dear Review Team members,

Please find attached the most recent version of the master document.

This version contains the following:

 *   Lynn's edits including review of Sharon and Law Enforcement's comments
 *   Susan's additional quotes from comments (NCUC, ALAC)
 *   The Dakar definitions
 *   Emily's language – findings section
 *   The best practices text (Susan, Kathy and James)
 *   Lutz' recommendations (along with alternatives - please refer to Kathy's email - No agreement on Lutz's recommendations - 1 Dec 22:51 UTC).

Please proofread all and closely examine text, in particular 7,8,9.

Note that footnotes have been added and that typos have been found.

I *believe* this document is up-to-date. Should you notice a missing piece of information or inconsistencies, please email me asap so that I can rectify for subsequent versions.

The document is also available on the wiki at: https://community.icann.org/display/whoisreviewprivate/Draft+report

Thanks,

Kind regards

Alice
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Alice Jansen
Assistant, Organizational Reviews
6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt.5
B-1040 Brussels
Belgium
Direct dial: +32 2 234 78 64
Mobile: +32 4 73 31 76 56
Skype: alice_jansen_icann


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