[Rt4-whois] flip last two recommendations?

[Emily Taylor]

Hi Kathy

Excellent job spotting this.  Thank you for your proposal which looks very
sensible, and provides clarity and Mikhail points out.

So, Alice, please would you change the word 'tables' to 'provides' in
recommendation 16 as described in Kathy's mail.

Kind regards

Emily

On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Kathy Kleiman wrote:

>  Hi All,
> What a tour de force!  It's really coming together. Thanks for all the
> hard work of everyone on the call last night.
>
> Quick question: can we flip the final two recommendations, and make a one
> word change -- the word tables?  I think it may mean something different in
> different cultures. In the US, if you "table" a motion, you put it aside
> and don't act on it. Since we certainly want people to act on it here, I
> would like to propose the words  "provides" or "lays out" instead.
>
> Best, Kathy
>
> CURRENT ==>
> Recommendation 15:  Annual Status Reports
> ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
> progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review
> Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the
> latest, after ICANN tables the implementation plan mentioned in
> recommendation 16. Each of these reports should contain all relevant
> information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.
>
> Recommendation 16:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
> ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months
> after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines
> how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.
>
>
> OFFERED ==>
> Recommendation 15:  Detailed and Comprehensive Plan
> ICANN should provide a detailed and comprehensive plan within 3 months
> after the submission of the Final WHOIS Review Team report that outlines
> how ICANN will move forward in implementing these recommendations.
>
> Recommendation 16:  Annual Status Reports
> ICANN should provide at least annual written status reports on its
> progress towards implementing the recommendations of this WHOIS Review
> Team. The first of these reports should be published one year, at the
> latest, after ICANN *tables *the implementation plan mentioned in *recommendation
> 15, above*. Each of these reports should contain all relevant
> information, including all underlying facts, figures and analyses.
>
>
>

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