[Ws2-jurisdiction] 21092017 Version of OFAC Recommendation Attached

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear Greg, Thanks for efforts
While I am reviewing those element you included in the recommands part, I
did suggest to also include other parts of the suggested paragraph in the
introductory and preamble part as amendedby me last night making them
softened ,taking account of Milton's and Paul? s comments
If yes pls advise where ( in the introductory and / or preamble part of the
documents) ) these other elements are included   .$
Tks
Kavouss

On Thu, Sep 21, 2017 at 7:29 AM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
wrote:

> All,
>
> I have attached Word and PDF versions of the Google Doc as it now stands,
> showing suggestions added by Thiago, and suggestions based on list
> contributions from Kavouss and Paul Rosenzweig.
>
> Please review these suggested changes and indicate your views by replying
> here and/or making suggestions in the Google Doc.
>
> it is important that we have broad review of these suggestions.  Thank you.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Greg
>
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