[Alac-sc-outreach] Draft presentation for ICANN57 At-Large meeting with Nextgen

[Tijani BEN JEMAA]

Thank you Dev for sharing the presentation.

I have some proposals of modification:

Page 6: Change the first para in this way: Any Internet End User Group or Group that supports the interests of individual end users can be a part of the At-Large Community. These include:

Page 10: First para: replace « represent » by « defend » 

Page 11: second para:  At-Large Community members may draft position statements, comment on draft statements and propose there drafts to the ALAC, and engage in …..

Page 14: Last para: ….. such as the SSAC, GNSO, ccNSO and GAC

Page 15: First para: Replace « core mission » by « main activities » 

Page 16: replace the text by the list of At-Large Working Groups

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Tijani BEN JEMAA
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Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI)
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> Le 22 oct. 2016 à 21:09, Dev Anand Teelucksingh <devtee at gmail.com> a écrit :
> 
> Dear All,
> 
> A preliminary draft of the At-Large presentation for the At-Large
> meeting with the Nextgen students at ICANN57 can be found at
> 
> https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1zFhDZ3m3mFyubb1crnVdqwmfBXU7_Vrdx-PiU1zEEW4/edit?usp=sharing
> 
> Its based on the presentation done for the At-Large-Nextgen meeting at ICANN56
> I've put some comments for possible improvements but wanted to share
> now to get additional suggestions from you all.
> 
> Dev Anand
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