[IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report

[Metalitz, Steven]

Hello Jamie,

I have no substantive edits for the draft report.  My only suggestion is that the full text of the current procedure should be included as an appendix to the report.  I was going to suggest the same treatment for the policy but I see that the full text of the output of the 2005 PDP appears in section 3 (under "Process Background").  You might consider changing the heading of that section 3 to "Current Policy and Process Background."

Thanks for your ongoing work on this review.

Steve Metalitz
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Subject: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report

All,

Attached please find the current draft preliminary report for your consideration. As discussed on the call, IAG members would have one week to propose any changes including the addition of minority statements. Please submit your edits no later than 23:59 UTC on 17 September 2015. ICANN will then seek comment on the document on 24 September 2015.

Please note some of the larger changes in the document: first, I removed all references to "consensus." My colleagues in policy support remind me that consensus only applies after public comment is taken into account. Second, I added James's full proposal to a new Appendix 2. Finally, I cleaned up the formatting.

Thank you again for your input and participation. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns about the draft.

Best,
Jamie

Jamie Hedlund
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Global Domains Division
ICANN
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