[gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review - updated RDS Statement of Purpose

[Stephanie Perrin]

  and here is the draft redline version


On 2016-09-28 22:34, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
>
> I apologize for missing the last two meetings.  I was travelling and 
> had difficulty connecting.  I have listened to the call of the 21st, 
> and I am going to listen to the next one as soon as it arrives.  I 
> have a number of concerns with the current draft purpose statement, 
> and am consulting my NCSG colleagues on a proposed redraft which I 
> have done.  As soon as I hear back from them I will share it with the 
> list, understanding that this is not the same as being on the call.  
> My concerns are basically the following:
>
> 1.  The purpose of the purpose clause exercise was, as far as I 
> understood it, to come up with a succinct purpose for the exercise in 
> which we are engaged....to limit the exercise to the minimum until 
> such  time as we have agreed on policy, as it is generally understood 
> that many policy issues have crept into the WHOIS and RDS without 
> benefit of a full PDP delberation.  Our remit is not to assume those 
> policy issues are a fait accompli, it is to examine them, thus the 
> limited scope of the purpose clause.  It is a business requirements 
> statement for the exercise.
>
> 2.  Several implicit assumptions appear to have crept in, namely that 
> an RDS is necessary, and that data will be released through it.  We 
> have not got there yet.  Discussion of rationales for the RDS is 
> straying way too far, in my view.
>
> 3.  While a statement of purpose is necessary for the interpretation 
> of ICANN's policies with respect to the collection, use, retention and 
> disclosure of personal information in the context of its registration 
> activities, this is not it.  We cannot through this exercise set up a 
> purpose for that, because it requires policy decisions, and we are not 
> there yet.  A goal can be compliance with national and regional law, 
> and with internationally recognized human rights obligations, but not 
> crafting the actual purpose statement. I hope that is clear, it is a 
> wee bit convoluted.
>
> I will send my proposed redline version as soon as possible.  
> Apologies once again for missing the calls.
>
> Stephanie Perrin
>
>
> On 2016-09-28 13:17, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:
>>
>> I found (and fixed) two more instances of “gTLD domain names”. Update 
>> attached.
>>
>> Scott
>>
>> *From:*gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org 
>> [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Marika Konings
>> *Sent:* Wednesday, September 28, 2016 1:12 PM
>> *To:* gnso-rds-pdp-wg at icann.org
>> *Subject:* [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review - updated RDS Statement 
>> of Purpose
>>
>> Dear All,
>>
>> Please find attached for your review the updated statement of purpose 
>> which aims to reflect the changes discussed during yesterday’s 
>> meeting. You are all encouraged to review this version, especially 
>> the section ‘Specific Purposes for Registration Data and Registration 
>> Directory Services’, and share your input with the mailing list prior 
>> to next week’s meeting. Also note that a couple of WG members (Marc & 
>> Fabrizio) volunteered to provide updated language for two specific 
>> parts of the document which have been flagged accordingly, so please 
>> hold your comments on those parts until the proposed language has 
>> been circulated.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Marika
>>
>> *Marika Konings*
>>
>> Senior Policy Director & Team Leader for the GNSO, Internet 
>> Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
>>
>> Email: marika.konings at icann.org <mailto:marika.konings at icann.org>
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