[Neobrahmigp] Public Comment Package for Devanagari, Gujarati, Gurmukhi

[Sarmad Hussain]

Dear Neo-Brahmi GP members,

the IP reviewed the Devanagari, Gujarati and Gurmukhi scripts in the Package 
and notes that all substantive recommendations made by the IP seem to have 
been incorporated.

All of them can now progress to public comment after making the corrections, 
shared below.



Devanagari Showstoppers:

1) variant context definition is missing for the "reverse mappings", that is 
V+Nukta -> V

these need to be added, otherwise the mappings are not formally symmetric (4 
instances)

[corrected XML attached]

A variant is defined by both mapping and context. Therefore a reverse mapping 
without a context is not a symmetric variant of a forward mapping with 
context.

2) 093A does not display in one of the tables (p38), even in the PDF.
    This may be due to selecting a font that does not support that code point.

    (GP is asked to fix the document so that 093A shows in the PDF on p38).


Minor Editorial (Devanagari):

The line spacing in new section 6.1.1. is unusually wide; perhaps adjust the 
paragraph format to force a fixed line spacing. Also, the header for 6.1.1 
does not have space below it, making it harder to recognize as a header.

Reference 109 in the XML is unused; it could be applied to 093C in the XML



Minor Editorial (Devanagari and Gujarati):

There are some minor spelling fixes suggested in the attached marked up 
copies.

Note that some of the document-internal cross-references to various sections 
and tables show up as modified in change-tracking even though the text appears 
unchanged. (These changes should be reviewed; they could be spurious).




Regards,
Sarmad

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